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I crave your fragrance
Your voice and your touch
Your presence a hindrance
Yet longed for so much

I crave your descriptions
Your hands and your lips
Your story just fiction
Yet living and rich

I crave your compassion
Your love and your trust
Your smile a concession
Yet still not enough

I crave you wholly
My love an addiction
So kiss me and hold me
And cure this affliction
©2008-2009 ~Antigone17
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Lovely emotion and a good beat. I like it. :star:

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Good rhythmic flow. :)
Thanks for the comment!
Thanks (also for the collection-add!!
I really like this poem... its a warm and fuzzy poem and we all need those from time to time, good luck

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